Explanation on how I organize my pages! The first ten pages written!

 Hello everyone! Today I am going to tell you the start of the story, beginning with the first 10 pages I worked out in detail. They are not drawn yet at all. I will share a drawing I have made by myself. Before I will dive into the story itself, I thought it would be best to explain how I write it. It is clear to me, but it might not be to everyone, so let's go!

OC I have once drawn. Know about the big forehead.She will not be in this story.

The things and what they mean, it's actually pretty simple :D

Page (number) indicates which page in the comic/manga it takes place.

(number)[text] indicates in which panel it takes place. for example 1[Jynx got shanked,] will take place at the first panel. 3[Jynx gliches] would take place at the third one. (yes, these are actual parts of the story, in case you were wondering.)

 If I say a name twice, like they are talking twice, it means I will be using multiple text bubbles. If I say something like 1[Luminary: we got enough people now. Luminary: We can start the game.] it means that both 'we got enough people now' and 'We can start the game' will be having their own bubbles.

And the last thing I need to explain is that (if I put text in between these fella's it means like a note to self, cause the written story is not finished yet, so I still have to improve some things.

You got it? Then let's dive straight in!

Sphere on a pillow. Figuring this out took longen then it should have lmao.

Anyways, here goes the first ten pages of the story! Have fun reading!

Page 1:

1[Microphone: And the winner is...]

2[Picture of Sully with a knocked out opponent, Sully standing victorious.]

Page 2:

1[Random person: Your throphy!]

2[Ransom person 2: The money!

3[Mysterious guy: A letter.]

 

Page 3:

1[Sully opens the letter]

2[Sully reads out loud: Go to abyssal residence... bring us... rewarded handsomely...]

3[Sully thinks, while lauging: He thinks he can buy me pfft]

4[silence while Sully reads more.]

5[PROBABLY NOT CAPABLE! I'LL SHOW THEM!!!]

Page 4

1[Sully in from of Abyssal residence (looks like a deserted hotel)]

Page 5

1-2[Sully rushes in, breaking the door and falling onto the ground]

3[Sully: what the? (The world is starting to become whobbly and a bit digital)]

Page 6

1[reveal of the digital world. The Luminary is here somewhere.

Page 7

1[Luminary: we got enough people now. Luminary: We can start the game.]

2[Luminary: Everyone will be in a team, but only one can win. Picture of Sully and Jynx being put into a room toghether, indicating that they are paired now.

3[Luminary: 3 lives each. Luminary: good luck!]

 

Page 8

1[Jynx: Hello! My name is Jynx! I'm looking forward to working toghether! He tries to give Sully a hand.]

2[Sully refuses the hand, while saying: I'll make sure we will win.

3[Jynx: That's great! Because we can only leave this place if we do win. Sully, a bit too confident: With me, we can't lose!

Page 9

1[Jynx: You're fourth... Sully: WHAT! (Sully imaging himself next to the classic 1, 2, 3 place podium

 2[Jynx: Of the weakest. Sully get's crushed in his imagination by an anvil.

Page 10:

1-2[Jynx and Sully transferring to a digital landschape.

3[Sully: What kind of battle is this anyways?

4[It's a free-for-all, so sticking toghether is MANDATORY. (close up on Jynx's face)

5[Jynx: And he's off... Sully: CHARGE!!! While charging at a random cowboy.

Welp this is it for now. I have some more pages written at the time I am writing this, but I like to keep these hidden till I have 20ish pages written. I'll share it when I have it done. 

See ya later everyone!

- Huskwrites