HuskWrites

 Hello Everyone! I am back from vacation and have written some more! Hope you are as excited as I am for this! The vacation was great, but I did miss writing, so I have written 8 pages! Hope you enjoy reading them as much as I enjoyed writing!   Page 23 1[Sully spots cowboy guy] 2[ Close up on Sully's face. Narrator: insert western music] 3[close up on cowboys face] 4[epic standoff shot (bit of phone cell visable)] 5[Cowboy get's killed by a phone cell (those old ones) from the right] Page 24 1[Picture of Random item guy's (we will be calling him RIG, cause that is more nice to read) RIG: 64.948] 2[Picture of face of RIG. RIG: Two more! RIG: How delightfull!] Page 25 1[RIG throws random stuff at Sully and Jynx 2[Jynx slices this stuff in front of Sully, while they move closer] 3[Sully jumps to try and attack RIG from above Page 26 1[RIG blocks the blow with a shovel] 2[Jynx attacks from the side] 3[RIG uses a paint bucket to deflect the attack and blind Jynx.] 4[Sully tryin...

 Hello everyone! Some people have reviewed pages 2-5 and gave me some helpful advice: giving Sully some more time before entering the abyssal residence to show off his character. So here are the revisions I made! Hope you enjoy! Page 2 1[And now, Sully Drake will be known as the new world champion!] 2-3[Sully being given a trophy and a medal] 4[Shot of podium with 1st place, 2nd place and 3rd place people. 5[Picture of Sully popping the victory champagne. Page 3 1[People in the cafeteria congratulating the guy who became second, while Sully sits alone. 2[guy: That’s the guy who stole the title. 3[Dude: Then let’s make sure he can’t do it again. Page 4 1[Guy: Hey world champ, congrats on the victory! Dude: Did you ever think: what’s next? 2[Dude: Because there is a challenge... Guy: No, that would be way too hard. 3[Sully: Tell me and see me beat it! Dude: Fine, it is called... Page 5 Narrator: The Abyssal challenge 1[Sully in from of Abyssal residence (looks like a deserted hotel)]...

 Hello everyone! (or the one person who reads this XD) This will be the text of my story on pages 11-22. One shots tempt to be max 60 pages long, so that is what I am going for. I already have 22 pages and am not coming close to the end. I expected this story to be like 20ish pages, but 30-40ish is going to be more realistic. These parts will feature a fight scene, the first one of three, so I have to make sure the fight scenes stay short, so it won't be like 50% fight scene, because that is not what this story is about, but merely a part of the story I am trying to tell. Anyone I spoiled a bit too much here I think XD so let's get into the story itself. If you don't know how I tell my story, forgot the specifics, or for some reason decided to read page 11-22 before you read the first ten, here is my explanation on how I do my organize my writing and my first ten pages . And now, let's dive into the juicy story. A drawing I made a couple of years ago. My best thus far. ...