Pages 23-30, a battle against RNG

 Hello Everyone! I am back from vacation and have written some more! Hope you are as excited as I am for this! The vacation was great, but I did miss writing, so I have written 8 pages! Hope you enjoy reading them as much as I enjoyed writing!

 

Page 23

1[Sully spots cowboy guy]

2[ Close up on Sully's face. Narrator: insert western music]

3[close up on cowboys face]

4[epic standoff shot (bit of phone cell visable)]

5[Cowboy get's killed by a phone cell (those old ones) from the right]


Page 24

1[Picture of Random item guy's (we will be calling him RIG, cause that is more nice to read) RIG: 64.948]

2[Picture of face of RIG. RIG: Two more! RIG: How delightfull!]


Page 25

1[RIG throws random stuff at Sully and Jynx

2[Jynx slices this stuff in front of Sully, while they move closer]

3[Sully jumps to try and attack RIG from above


Page 26

1[RIG blocks the blow with a shovel]

2[Jynx attacks from the side]

3[RIG uses a paint bucket to deflect the attack and blind Jynx.]

4[Sully trying to attack RIG in his back]

5[RIG has a car and smashes Sully]

6[Black screen]

 

Page 27

1[Sully shoots up in a sitting position with the relization: Jynx is still there.]

2[Sully standing while thinking: He can't beat him alone.]

3[Sully starts running. Sully: I'll be there on time. Sully: I won't be late]


Page 28

1[Jynx uses his hand to remove the paint from his eyes to restore his vision.]

2[RIG standing, with his back turned to Jynx, while saying: 64.949. A bit of the life exchange item is visable above the car.]

 3[Jynx runs towards RIG]

4[Jynx slides in between RIG's legs and escapes being hit by a tea pot.]

5[Jynx grabs the life exchange, while doing a little jump]

 

Page 29

1[Sully: Don't do it! Sully: We can win this fight, toghether!]

2[Jynx; I have been here for way too long. Jynx: You don't need to know what that feels like.]

3[Jynx smiles]


Page 30

1[Jynx activates the life exchange on RIG]


That was it for now! See you later! Tell me what you think in the comments!

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